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Didn't you know? They're swept away by the rain to evaporate back into the skies and we see them each day as stars of the earth.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 24, 2009 at 1:29 PM
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You just made me think back to days. . ,
when nothing was better than running to the end of a dock and jumping into the water. Damn. ., those were the days!
posted by
Joe_Love
on May 23, 2009 at 2:38 PM
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Sinome
You took me back and gave me a glimpse of those days...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 23, 2009 at 12:05 PM
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posted by
BrightIrish
on May 22, 2009 at 8:10 PM
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Memories don't easily fade Sinome
posted by
shobana
on May 22, 2009 at 6:31 PM
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Sinome....you just took me away to those memorable summer days. There you go again, writing so beautifully.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 22, 2009 at 4:29 PM
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I love it
posted by
Lanetay
on May 22, 2009 at 4:02 AM
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Ah yes who can forget their first love, first kiss, first hurt Sinome
wonderfully portrayed here in this beauty of a poem; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 22, 2009 at 3:26 AM
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Sinome Till now I can't forget my first kiss. I still remember her name the place the face and the lovely kiss. A memory from our childhood that can't be forgotten. I think these moments are cherished forever. Very nice Poem
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on May 21, 2009 at 11:05 PM
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Sinome
Well put luv, those early sumers of life and clumsy kisses were a thrill and you've covered it with your graceful poetry so beautifully luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 21, 2009 at 9:12 PM
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Clumsy first kiss... seed of a gripping story
posted by
hardilaziz
on May 21, 2009 at 8:46 PM
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Such a beautiful reminiscence. Thanks for taking me back through those wonderful memories :)
posted by
calia14
on May 21, 2009 at 8:04 PM
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Very nice imagery my Sinome! I, too, wonder at times myself! They seem to fade like a summer sunset! Love you! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 21, 2009 at 4:17 PM
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My how the times change.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 21, 2009 at 4:15 PM
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You dig beautiful imagery love.
posted by
BC-A
on May 21, 2009 at 12:26 PM
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I think they’re still there – the dreams ready to be born beneath a summer’s rain. Lovely, as always, Sinome!
posted by
Troosha
on May 21, 2009 at 11:53 AM
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