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You are so right Mindy... I will correct it loll Thanks!!! You wre the only one that noticed or that took the time to tell me xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on June 8, 2009 at 7:59 PM
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I really enjoy that resounding finish...as if we are all frozen in some way from the path that we walk, but always walking towards something warmer, something worth the walk. I reason to stay on the road and complete the journey.
By the way, I was curious about one line: that grows lauder as a continue to go forth.<-- I was wondering if the word "lauder" should be "louder"? and "a continue" should be "I continue"?
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 5:47 PM
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What an outstanding close! I am stopping to say hello sweetie! I shall return to catch up! Thanks for stopping in, it meant a lot, lot, lot to me! I know you love me the mostest, but I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! Tomorrow is furniture moving day! I will be sleeping in my new digs tomorrow night! And I will be able to say 'Honey, I'm home'!!! lol sammie
posted by
sam444
on May 29, 2009 at 10:09 PM
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Yes, that's how heaven should be.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 29, 2009 at 8:35 PM
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Beautiful!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on May 29, 2009 at 8:18 PM
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I'm sure heaven is a warm place, where there never will be cold, hunger, pain and hate. But, Marta, life on this earth isn't such a frozen path either, at least not always. You liked the wedding, he? No, no cloth of gold for the hubby my dear, it's totally a lady's day.
posted by
vogue
on May 29, 2009 at 3:30 PM
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Sinome, one thing we know for sure, heaven's climate will be perfect
and there will be no more coldness or disease there....it's great to look forward to it..
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posted by
Rumor
on May 29, 2009 at 1:25 PM
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So poetically wondrous.. is your frozen path that leads to the warmth, beauty and light.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 29, 2009 at 12:26 AM
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Right on Marta Heaven should be that warm inviting light at the end of the journey!Bravo!
posted by
merkie
on May 28, 2009 at 9:59 PM
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