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A very expressive poem of the hardships and emotions that conflict in us at least one time or another. Times when we chose to not just believe, but ask why - because sometimes we just need answers. But the pain eases...and we learn to believe again.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 9, 2009 at 8:20 PM
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Deep expressive read for this is to much creativity for one awsome pattern
of thoughts amazing the heart with zeal!
posted by
Mystereo
on June 2, 2009 at 7:03 PM
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He views us from all possible angles. It's my fault if I cannot accept his blessings! Good work.
posted by
hardilaziz
on June 2, 2009 at 5:27 PM
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A great take on life after death - thank you.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on June 2, 2009 at 12:08 PM
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I love your poem

thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on June 2, 2009 at 2:42 AM
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What a stunning poem! Congratulations and kudos! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 2, 2009 at 2:10 AM
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Shobana
Seems like you are addressing God here and it's very well done, at least that's my take on it
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 1, 2009 at 8:56 PM
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Seeing a panarama from aloft! What a wondrful view.

Wings!!
posted by
merkie
on June 1, 2009 at 7:46 PM
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