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It is a heartbreak to see people spiral down with alcohol. It hurts so many around them, as much as themselves.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 11, 2009 at 4:43 PM
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Splendid, splendid
It is a demon which haunts us at some point or another, in one way or another. Great writing
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on June 6, 2009 at 3:02 PM
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Sounds Like a Couple of People I know.
It's strange what a little drinking can do to someone. It's like they have two personalities.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 6, 2009 at 1:24 PM
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Re: BrightIrish
I'll have to check it out!
posted by
calia14
on June 6, 2009 at 3:10 AM
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Profound Description! This desease not only tortures the addict but reaches out to all who love and care for the person.
I want to thank you for your comment on my recipe blog. Today was the last day for that blog and hopefully the new blog ' Hidden Treasures' will provide more for the reader.
posted by
BrightIrish
on June 5, 2009 at 9:27 PM
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...whoa! serious writing. serious business. serious. i mean serious. 
moon
posted by
magic_moon
on June 5, 2009 at 3:56 PM
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posted by
texture
on June 5, 2009 at 7:03 AM
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You have a huge heart for life is a gift we all come face to face with
demons! To write take will and courage.
posted by
Mystereo
on June 4, 2009 at 4:55 PM
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It is so unfortunate that there are no magic pills
to disperse those demons my friend; excellent imagery and a theme so many relate to; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on June 4, 2009 at 3:48 AM
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There are so many, from all walks of life, who can relate to this.
posted by
PlumpyNutCase
on June 4, 2009 at 3:33 AM
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Must be hard to cope with this phenomenon. God bless.
posted by
hardilaziz
on June 3, 2009 at 10:56 PM
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Such a beautiful poem that discusses the dilemma of drinking. Very good description
Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on June 3, 2009 at 8:00 PM
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Wow! I thought I was reading about my ex! Wow, again! This hit me deep, such perfect descriptive imagery for me! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 3, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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Those demons have ruined many a relationship.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 3, 2009 at 11:31 AM
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Heavy duty problems with those demons! The only place to solve it is in the light of day!
posted by
merkie
on June 3, 2009 at 8:44 AM
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