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Your poems have been so heartbreaking lately. More so than usual it seems. Is your heart lost in bittersweet memories?
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 6:10 PM
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The world moves on.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 7, 2009 at 4:27 PM
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i held my breath until you were done. Absolutely......
posted by
texture
on June 7, 2009 at 4:03 PM
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Beautifully written and very graceful.
posted by
Chilitree
on June 7, 2009 at 1:24 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful, and you won't have to play that letting go sadnes for another 50 years luv. This kind of writing must go on, and on
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 7, 2009 at 9:45 AM
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You write the most beautiful poems
I can get lost in them forever.
posted by
skye08
on June 7, 2009 at 8:21 AM
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I thought the imagery was stupendous! I read it aloud because it felt most natural that way! You certainly covered the gamut in this poem! [I have not received my rugs yet, it was only a partial delivery of my order. Perhaps this week!] Love you: MOSTEST!!!!
xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on June 7, 2009 at 7:27 AM
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I really like this and I kept my promise, a little late but better late then never
posted by
Lanetay
on June 7, 2009 at 12:43 AM
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beautiful and unique-it's something we all think about, but you had the guts to write about it-and you pulled it off wonderfully
posted by
calia14
on June 6, 2009 at 10:08 PM
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That was a hauntingly beautiful masterpiece.
It touched me deeply.
posted by
muley12
on June 6, 2009 at 7:17 PM
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when my time to go, I will think of nbomt voice, so I can take to heaven
with me..........
Nice one....
posted by
Star5_
on June 6, 2009 at 6:23 PM
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