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so very clever! Poetry that plays!
posted by
merkie
on June 17, 2009 at 10:36 PM
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Tired
Tired
So tired i don't even know how to spell tired.
It just looks wrong
like
cracks in the sidewalk
or something you look
at so long you can't
tell what it is anymore.
ABSTRACT
In early art it was the theory of the
artful accident. ( I forgot the actual term, but as I said, too tired to look it up) (( tomorrow)) perhaps.
Nothing happens randomly
Nothing happens that does not
enhance.
If i have spelled it wrong, spell check did not catch it, or it thought I meant I was tied up with tires.
I do need tires.
posted by
texture
on June 17, 2009 at 7:26 PM
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Thank you all for the comments. Daring they were. :)
posted by
texture
on June 17, 2009 at 1:10 PM
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Stunning work indeed...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 17, 2009 at 9:43 AM
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Very nice poem!
posted by
BrightIrish
on June 16, 2009 at 4:55 PM
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Such dares are always worth taking
if only for the fun you'll have
posted by
lionreign
on June 16, 2009 at 7:30 AM
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I like it!
Just had a conversation today with my son about the benefits of prying one's self out of one's comfort zone, as he has begun to discover since he went away, far away, to college, and lived.
posted by
Ciel
on June 15, 2009 at 8:48 PM
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Intriguing
That could mean stopping meditating; back into "the tempest of thought". Ambiguous yet captivating.
posted by
Sudanym_
on June 15, 2009 at 10:34 AM
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Is that a questioning anguished statement or is that a challenge?
posted by
Straightforward
on June 14, 2009 at 7:06 PM
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Very good.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 13, 2009 at 4:52 PM
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posted by
PlumpyNutCase
on June 13, 2009 at 3:48 AM
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I adored tempest of thought; great line! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 12, 2009 at 6:31 PM
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texture
That was winsome and I really enjoed it luv, yup, I dare you..
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 12, 2009 at 3:40 PM
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Yes, I do... Great poem!
posted by
Chilitree
on June 12, 2009 at 9:54 AM
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Kressie Baer*s All Aah it’s an accomplishment to reach out by your mind. BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on June 12, 2009 at 9:49 AM
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