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A good poem for couples to read.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 16, 2009 at 2:34 PM | link to this | reply

Sigh....
Yes, it is hard.....I agree with "ouch" - this poem hurts, almost physically.

posted by Raphael222 on June 16, 2009 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply

....ouch...

posted by NiteTide on June 15, 2009 at 6:05 PM | link to this | reply

I liked this very much:

Holier than thou attitudes

Throw cold water

On tender romance!

 It certainly will! sam

posted by sam444 on June 15, 2009 at 5:34 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Mal...
Thanks for the concern, but nothing personal :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on June 15, 2009 at 5:02 PM | link to this | reply

ash, this reminds me of a Pastor we had who said a couple can fall
out of love and ruin their marriage with these negative thoughts and actions within a week...frightening, but true....

posted by Rumor on June 15, 2009 at 3:24 PM | link to this | reply

I hope this was about someone else or a cautionary tale and not about you and yours!  Mal

posted by gapcohen on June 15, 2009 at 12:04 PM | link to this | reply

Love is blind, so maybe at times these death traps are not visible.......

posted by shamasehar on June 15, 2009 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply

So very true - by such things is sweet romance murdered
and yet she can always be revived if both sides are willing to make the effort to truly love themselves and then each other.  Beautifully expressed wisdom again, my friend.

posted by lionreign on June 15, 2009 at 10:05 AM | link to this | reply

ASH......jump on cool water, think twice,you see it great, and it all will
be cool....

posted by Star5_ on June 15, 2009 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Too sad Ash Step back and try again to rekindle the spark?

posted by merkie on June 15, 2009 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

Best to avoid these death traps before it's too late!

posted by ash_pradhan on June 15, 2009 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply