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BCA, BillJRoost The lines hit me realistically awesome love.
posted by
BC-A
on June 19, 2009 at 8:55 AM
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I'm enjoying the way the narrative is unfolding.. piece by piece
posted by
mneme
on June 18, 2009 at 10:11 PM
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You have created characters i would be willing to be. :)
posted by
texture
on June 18, 2009 at 4:51 AM
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Intimate peeks...well done!
posted by
Ariala
on June 18, 2009 at 4:48 AM
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This is good stuff, Azur...
It begs mimicry.
posted by
Pat_B
on June 18, 2009 at 3:36 AM
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Uh oh, someone's not happy...or is it that "smile". Your writing is stirring and fun in the same breath. Love it.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 17, 2009 at 11:37 PM
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Right on! These just make my day! I have been thinking of you every time I move a box of books or unload one! I don't think I had thirty but they won't stop! I still store all my kids books and they have at least two!These are from their childhood! I told them they could not have their stuff until they got their first permanent home! I did this because I remembered how much I lost being careless in my 20's! I am off to the marquee to fix a bulb! Stage left, I believe, care for a drink on the veranda? lol sam
posted by
sam444
on June 17, 2009 at 11:20 PM
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Azur
It is unique this unsaid letters that you write. Leaves a lot to imagination.
posted by
shobana
on June 17, 2009 at 10:13 PM
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