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I love your style
the ease of metre and imagery just allow me to get caught up and carried by your work
posted by
lionreign
on June 24, 2009 at 8:11 AM
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Fantastic! I love how you can keep this going and maintain the imagery and interest! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 23, 2009 at 9:30 AM
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"BETWEEN the lines the truth resides,(You carry us with images bright and tech wisdom in concluded light! )
it lives with your passion and care,
but in the shadows of green it carefully hides
then enters your dreams to kiss your hair." Excellent verse Lauren
posted by
merkie
on June 23, 2009 at 8:33 AM
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Nice rhymes and imagery.
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
on June 23, 2009 at 6:14 AM
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