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This is a very good poem with word pictures that many can relate to. Loving someone can hurt, when it is not returned. God heals the heart and then we can love again.
posted by
mariposa75
on October 12, 2009 at 6:10 PM
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This is a outstanding vision of love. Although you are in pain .. know that is a blessing to have this capacity to love. Be Strong! 
posted by
BrightIrish
on July 12, 2009 at 2:36 PM
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I cried out to the Lord and heals me.
Please try. Hope
posted by
hope26
on July 11, 2009 at 7:01 AM
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Whoa! Was not expecting that ending. Losing love is painful, it makes you question your worth and yourself, but there is still wonder in this world!
posted by
calia14
on July 10, 2009 at 11:16 PM
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Straight, u will find the right guy one day....
never end your life for someone.....it's not worth, no body is more than you.......because you are so nice person....
posted by
Star5_
on July 10, 2009 at 10:23 AM
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SANP I was going to write that there wasn’t anything wrong with that but this has a surprise ending man. It’s still alright, that is, in a poem. BCA, Bill
Roost
posted by
BC-A
on July 9, 2009 at 7:49 AM
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What a poem! You have written it from the heart
Hope
posted by
hope26
on July 9, 2009 at 7:30 AM
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wellall I can say is that in the end that person didn't deserve you
you gave, they took! Wonderful sad poem that has stirred my response.
posted by
Kabu
on July 5, 2009 at 6:31 PM
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An incredibly heart-wrenching poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 5, 2009 at 12:09 PM
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It is better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all! I can appreciate this poem for it poignancy when a love is lost! It does feel like death at times! Kudos on this fine effort! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 4, 2009 at 3:23 PM
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