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Hi .. Your poem made total sense to me and your written paragraph expressed your great ability to love. 
posted by
BrightIrish
on July 6, 2009 at 6:30 PM
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The older we grow the greater we feel the need for love as you said .
Great poem !
posted by
afzal50
on July 6, 2009 at 6:26 PM
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Shobana:
The poem is wonderful. I liked the paragraph below too. It is so visual and cute. Old men lose their physical power but they will not let go of the assumption as they tell you about a day when. He sounds cute as can be. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on July 6, 2009 at 4:52 PM
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It makes total sense - to those of us who are aging.....
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on July 6, 2009 at 12:33 PM
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Your poem makes a lot of sense to me. Love while you can.
posted by
Chilitree
on July 6, 2009 at 9:47 AM
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Boils down to what is most important doe'nt it? Good share!
posted by
merkie
on July 6, 2009 at 9:26 AM
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Very nice description on aging
Hope your dad feels well soon.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on July 6, 2009 at 8:50 AM
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Liked your implosion and explication.
You are in a difficult place right now. Hope your dad gets better. I enjoyed the explosion of descriptives about your situations.
posted by
michaudblaine
on July 5, 2009 at 9:42 PM
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Re: Hey Shobana, this is great pontification on agefication :-)
Hi Straightforward, that was cute. Glad you could understand the poem though!!
posted by
shobana
on July 5, 2009 at 8:03 PM
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Hey Shobana, this is great pontification on agefication :-)
posted by
Straightforward
on July 5, 2009 at 7:58 PM
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