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I practically lived in the forest. Those walks usually had the hairs on my head standing straight! LOL
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 24, 2009 at 7:12 PM
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I like Nature's laughter being described as rustling.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 24, 2009 at 6:53 PM
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Yes, I agree: Excellent!
You have the gift my dear...I feel it...know it...deep in my heart...
posted by
Raphael222
on July 24, 2009 at 5:04 PM
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Excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 24, 2009 at 3:04 PM
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Wonderful imagery with such a poignant close! Hey sweetie! Love you! sammie
posted by
sam444
on July 24, 2009 at 3:00 PM
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(Sinome - please check you email - Raphael)
posted by
Raphael222
on July 24, 2009 at 1:34 PM
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I can almost hear the wind through the leaves....wonderful! Thanks very much for your kind comment on my post, and prayers for Ashish. Have a good weekend! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on July 24, 2009 at 12:23 PM
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That is so inviting
and really made me sit up. I've read it several times and it really is very compelling and evocative of that peculiar mood that trees and dusk and nightfall bring.
posted by
malcolm
on July 24, 2009 at 11:01 AM
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Wonderfull Sinome! If not a slightly scarey thought-(for me).Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 24, 2009 at 10:21 AM
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I’ve seen the New Jersey Pine Barrens, camping at night, and the Poconos love. However I think that I missed the Jersey Devil. BCA, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on July 24, 2009 at 8:04 AM
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Thie poem is excellent from the first word
but the last two lines were unrestrained brilliance for me and took this poem from memorable to mind blowing. Bravo!!!
posted by
lionreign
on July 24, 2009 at 7:41 AM
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Sinome
sheer music but without a score or a melody….These words brought the sound of the leaves to life for me. And there’s nothing like hearing the sound of “raw life”! Loved the mood this piece invoked…..
posted by
Troosha
on July 24, 2009 at 6:45 AM
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I love the forest at night with a full moon overhead...thanks for taking
us there!
posted by
Ariala
on July 24, 2009 at 5:39 AM
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