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Very amusing
posted by
Azur
on August 31, 2009 at 11:51 PM
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I like the imagery with the whiskers.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 4, 2009 at 5:33 PM
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Naut
Had to read you comment to "get it" - of course... an open door and the cat! Duh, Troosha.
posted by
Troosha
on August 4, 2009 at 10:33 AM
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Composing myself
for sleep, ScamperCat becomes
TickleMyFace
posted by
Ciel
on August 4, 2009 at 9:53 AM
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oh purrrrrrrrfect
. loved it.
posted by
bythewindowsill
on August 4, 2009 at 8:31 AM
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But imagine the intrigue if it were the guy from across the street
did he have a knife.....was this a secret affair and if so with who....you or the missus.....was it a robber......but now we find it was just puss cat.
growl
posted by
Kabu
on August 3, 2009 at 8:52 PM
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Nautikos - lol. that's quite enlightening to know.lol. I would have been horrified if it was the guy from across the street.lol! That was cute.
posted by
shobana
on August 3, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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HAHAHA at that last thought you leave with us.
The haiku itself was great.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 3, 2009 at 4:46 PM
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I hear you loud and clear! I so adore your Haikus! Very cool on the Specialized, that is what my son rides! I, like Auslander, ride Giant! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on August 3, 2009 at 12:27 PM
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Re:
To clear up any possible misunderstanding, shobana, it was the
cat, not the guy from across the street...
posted by
Nautikos
on August 3, 2009 at 7:09 AM
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Nautikos - yeah you're right but whiskers??
posted by
shobana
on August 3, 2009 at 1:17 AM
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I love your haiku with feeling. BC-A, Bill*s Cyberspace Hotlink
posted by
BC-A
on August 2, 2009 at 10:55 PM
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I love it! This reminds me of my cat.
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 2, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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