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Ash Pradhan...
I just wrote a poem called An Ego Party! I think you would like it...
http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/Raphael222/
Here is the beginning to start you off:
Come to a loving reception,
Come dressed to kill.
Brighten your hair,
Perfume your charms,
Hold delicate bracelets
On elegant arms.
Smile with delight,
Your teeth so white.
Bring your books,
Bring your looks,
Bring your thoughts,
And opinions too.
This party’s for Ego
Yes, this party’s for you.
Healthy Egos
In reds, blues and yellows,
Fill the room,
Drinking wine -
Blushing,
Having a fine
Old time.
posted by
Raphael222
on August 16, 2009 at 10:43 AM
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Re: Earth’s celestial insignificance....?
Raphael, by all means, let us love our Mother Earth for sure, but not our egos :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 15, 2009 at 4:25 PM
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Earth’s celestial insignificance....?
I know where you are coming from, but I believe Earth is no more insignificant or significant than anything else in God's marvelous universe.
Certainly for humans it is pretty significant. There is nothing wrong with that, is there?
posted by
Raphael222
on August 14, 2009 at 12:49 PM
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Re: Calia...
The first book is named "Cosmic Reflections", which is the theme of the book. The first poem is "Spaceship". The finale is "Sitting Quiet". In all, the book will have 101 poems related to the theme. The second book is named "Rhytms of the Heart". How is yours coming? - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 13, 2009 at 6:31 PM
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How right you are Ash! I enjoyed this read-thanks. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 13, 2009 at 6:59 AM
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Re: merkie
What are you thinking of naming your book, Ash? This should definitely be one of the first poems in it!
posted by
calia14
on August 12, 2009 at 8:18 PM
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Those egos are a ball and chain...Mal
posted by
gapcohen
on August 12, 2009 at 12:59 PM
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People could get so much farther ahead if the ego was checked at the door so to speak! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 12, 2009 at 4:15 AM
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Very true; the ego is a big obstacle! Thanks for the kind comment on my post. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on August 11, 2009 at 11:43 PM
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Killer ego!
posted by
hardilaziz
on August 11, 2009 at 6:39 PM
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You are right, man and his ego, it is a long journey to go to
Thank you for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on August 11, 2009 at 5:23 AM
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Yes, this is so true.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 10, 2009 at 4:53 PM
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ash, is that because the human ego has a bit of PInocchio in it?
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posted by
Rumor
on August 10, 2009 at 1:54 PM
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Brilliant observation!
posted by
elinjo
on August 10, 2009 at 1:01 PM
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Wise view Ash. Cosmic Reflection indeed. Good title for your book!
posted by
merkie
on August 10, 2009 at 10:41 AM
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Think of us, standing in the cosmos! BCA, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on August 10, 2009 at 9:42 AM
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That's progress :)!
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 10, 2009 at 9:07 AM
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