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Such vivid images.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 12, 2009 at 1:24 PM
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Sam - thank you so much and it's great to have you commenting again.
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shobana
on August 11, 2009 at 6:54 PM
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Taps - that's nice..thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on August 11, 2009 at 6:53 PM
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Merkie - thank you so much and yes quite a dying breed I think.
posted by
shobana
on August 11, 2009 at 6:52 PM
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Elinjo - thank you so much and yes they all preach the same.
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shobana
on August 11, 2009 at 6:51 PM
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Rockingrector - thank you so much.
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shobana
on August 11, 2009 at 6:51 PM
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What a fantastic depiction! You are very right it is a dying breed! I think those who work to the sheen of glistening bodies are the best the world has to offer! It will be a shame when it is no more for in it we may lose all humbleness! Fantastic poem! sam
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sam444
on August 11, 2009 at 2:27 PM
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You made me feel as if I were there.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 11, 2009 at 2:17 PM
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"In this hardened life, men singing their songs
In the early morn of the simple ways
Is a dying breed in time to come." A beauty in living . So sad to see this joy of life passing away. 
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merkie
on August 11, 2009 at 9:51 AM
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I too liked the rhythm of this poem, the descriptions of the simple life style and the allusion to that all religions preach good as opposed to evil. Thanks for your visit.
posted by
elinjo
on August 11, 2009 at 4:11 AM
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Lovely, rhythmical imagery of village life based around the work of fishing. Thank you.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on August 11, 2009 at 3:40 AM
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Re: Hard lives but not disguised as happy
thank you too Malcolm and you're most welcome.
posted by
shobana
on August 11, 2009 at 1:52 AM
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Hard lives but not disguised as happy
as so many are. Lovely words and thanks for your comment on my blog.
posted by
malcolm
on August 11, 2009 at 1:33 AM
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thank you so much lustorlove.
posted by
shobana
on August 10, 2009 at 8:19 PM
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They dont know but they live the good life
posted by
Lanetay
on August 10, 2009 at 8:18 PM
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BCA - Hi, thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on August 10, 2009 at 8:02 PM
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Your poem uses imagery vividly love. I like it. BCA, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on August 10, 2009 at 7:59 PM
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Thank you so much Wiley John.
posted by
shobana
on August 10, 2009 at 7:55 PM
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Shobana
A beautiful fishing scene painted with lovey, expressive words.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 10, 2009 at 7:51 PM
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Justi - thank you so much. scenes of a village life.
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shobana
on August 10, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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Soulbuilder - lol, yeah I think whistling is easier and they do that too and I love those singing workers too.!!
posted by
shobana
on August 10, 2009 at 7:23 PM
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Such wonderful imagery. They whole scene is painted beautifully.
posted by
Justi
on August 10, 2009 at 7:05 PM
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I loved the singing workers in those hindi films! I think whistling is easier!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on August 10, 2009 at 7:04 PM
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