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scent mango makes you dreamy, romantic......
posted by
Star5_
on August 23, 2009 at 6:58 AM
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I feel as though you sucked me in and I went along for the ride.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 22, 2009 at 8:00 PM
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I hate the feeling emptiness brings.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 22, 2009 at 4:40 PM
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Sinome
I could get totally lost in an environment of mango! This was a beautifully written poem. The smells, sounds, colors and feeling of the rain were so strong. I love this. Be blessed. xoxoxox
posted by
Justi
on August 21, 2009 at 8:43 PM
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Emptiness can be all consuming! Loved this imagery with its excellent cadence! How are you feeling, and how is the recovery? Love you!!!! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on August 21, 2009 at 2:04 PM
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I really miss the Australian Mango. Great poem sweetie luv.
posted by
Kabu
on August 21, 2009 at 9:15 AM
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Such a beautifuly vivid poem
I felt that I was the storm right alongside you.
I too once wished never to feel empty again... my wish was answered when somebody showed me how to fill the empty places with myself 
posted by
lionreign
on August 21, 2009 at 8:26 AM
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Your sensory details bring the words to life; just wonderful! Thanks very much for your warm comment on my post and prayers for Ashish--am truly grateful. I hope you're feeling stronger every day; lovely to have you back. Take care! Love, Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on August 21, 2009 at 7:58 AM
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Sinome
How can anyone who writes such words as… I felt a soft summer breeze, perfumed with the scent of ripe mangoes, combing through my hair, ever feel “empty”. Powerful and engaging write, Sinome. Well done!
posted by
Troosha
on August 21, 2009 at 7:09 AM
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Gripping words and such beautiful imagery!
posted by
Ariala
on August 21, 2009 at 4:47 AM
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Nice to see you back home my dear Sinome
and I see you are back with a bang! Awesome post; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on August 21, 2009 at 3:59 AM
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No mango scent but the fragrance of your words soothes my tired eyes ..
sigh...lovely write!
posted by
merkie
on August 20, 2009 at 9:22 PM
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How coincidental...I just had a mango :)!
Welcome back Sinome...and back you are!! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 20, 2009 at 9:14 PM
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