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Your beautiful poem is outstanding...
There is a woman
In my dreams
Her name is Love.
She is Joy,
Lovely to behold
Waiting for me,
Always there -
Sometimes blonde, brunette
Or fair -
Always warm, wise and wonderful,
Kind and good...
Perfect, through and through.
Who is this woman?
She is you!
posted by
Raphael222
on August 29, 2009 at 4:56 AM
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That ending leaves so much to ponder.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 25, 2009 at 6:26 PM
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You Too...
I've come across many a written word that made me want to bounce off of it and do the same as you Sinome. Lovely way to recognize somebody words that took you to a place.
posted by
LaMerci
on August 24, 2009 at 3:55 PM
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Wow Marta excellent beyond expression. You never know.
posted by
merkie
on August 24, 2009 at 2:04 PM
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beautifully written and I would love to have somany people clammering for
my work...peopleI may never meet.
posted by
Kabu
on August 24, 2009 at 11:54 AM
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what a melodious cascade... beeeeeutiful!
posted by
bythewindowsill
on August 24, 2009 at 11:50 AM
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Sinome
Phewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! cold shower time.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 24, 2009 at 11:24 AM
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This is absolutley enchanting
and so romantic - I love this, I think it's one of your best.
posted by
lionreign
on August 24, 2009 at 8:23 AM
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"They come alive and seduce me,
dance in front of me like fire," Love those lines, and what a gorgeously flowing poem. Your poem sizzles.
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 24, 2009 at 7:39 AM
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What a lovely poem for Blogit.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on August 24, 2009 at 7:16 AM
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Lovely lyrical quality
posted by
malcolm
on August 24, 2009 at 5:45 AM
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Sinome, it is a nice poem that comes deep from the heart
I love it.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on August 24, 2009 at 4:40 AM
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This is strikingly beautiful! KUDOS Sweetie! LOVE YOU, too! sammie
posted by
sam444
on August 23, 2009 at 9:16 PM
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awesome!
posted by
Star5_
on August 23, 2009 at 6:42 PM
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