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Re: there are some conflict there, but this person is influenced very much
in my life........when I loose the hope in life, I get a lift from this soul for next moment......
for years and years.....this person help me live .....and try to help me solve my issues without expecting nothing......I mean nothing at all......
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Star5_
on August 26, 2009 at 8:42 PM
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Re: When one really loves someone...whomever I wrote this never compell nor
compete with me in any form......but there's a true mystery behind it and there are few things I can never explain with words......This was written for a friend of mine for a long time.......and to my music who helped me survive me from the hell of agony and saved me truly from the death .....so if you owes your life to someone that deep...........they never expect nothing from you......
at least a true poem to express.....
if I think of everything between this person .....all I could remember the sweetness of fresh air, jumping on river and getting chilled......running up to the floral gardens......and listening to my favorite songs........that beautiful friendship.....
So.....I put that thought in imagery and wrote this poem today to keep me alive for the day.....because I had such a bad day......
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Star5_
on August 26, 2009 at 8:39 PM
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Re: thank you....
posted by
Star5_
on August 26, 2009 at 8:32 PM
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This love poem’s driven by conflict powerfully love. BC-A, Top of the Stairs
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BC-A
on August 26, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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When one really loves someone...
one doesn't compete / battle with them, so where's the question of surrender?
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 26, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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9star - beautiful thoughts here. 
posted by
shobana
on August 26, 2009 at 4:47 PM
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9star - beautiful thoughts here.
posted by
shobana
on August 26, 2009 at 4:47 PM
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