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Amazing what a tiny drop can represent.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 29, 2009 at 4:35 PM
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I love to feel fresh water running through my hands or across my feet
lovely poem darling.
posted by
Kabu
on August 29, 2009 at 11:07 AM
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sinome my dear......such a beautiful!
posted by
Star5_
on August 29, 2009 at 8:48 AM
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A drop of water in my hand. What a beautiful idea for a nice poem. I love it
Thank you for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on August 28, 2009 at 10:55 PM
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What more can I say that has not been said already? A truly beautiful poem. Thanks for visiting my page.
posted by
elinjo
on August 28, 2009 at 10:24 PM
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Sinome
Oh I loved that. You got me. I just knew it would be a tear in the end. I love it!!!! Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on August 28, 2009 at 10:02 PM
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What essence you have ascribed to a simple drop of water! Your talent astonishes me, Sinome!
posted by
calia14
on August 28, 2009 at 7:47 PM
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very different
posted by
Lanetay
on August 28, 2009 at 7:40 PM
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And, it is life love. BC-A, Bill’s Avant-Garde Collection
posted by
BC-A
on August 28, 2009 at 6:50 PM
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Sinome, wow, when you consider what may have been the journey of
one drop of water in one's hand, it opens up the world for us..
...
posted by
Rumor
on August 28, 2009 at 3:27 PM
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Sinome
You never fail to draw your reader into that moment your are experiencing and we follow your line of thinking one precious word at a time.
posted by
Troosha
on August 28, 2009 at 2:21 PM
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Sinome
I loved this line; "
or the only survivor of a river running free" and the entire poem of course, oh you do have such a way with gentleness and love
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 28, 2009 at 1:07 PM
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Only confirms my view that "seeing lies in the eyes of the viewer". Do come
by and visit my blog by that name.
posted by
Straightforward
on August 28, 2009 at 9:54 AM
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Exceptional write Marta Outstanding content ,Bravo!
posted by
merkie
on August 28, 2009 at 9:20 AM
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