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Ooooh, this was good.
posted by
Darson
on October 3, 2009 at 6:58 PM
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Sweet sigh
What an inspiration to live by ~ Elyse says 'write on'
posted by
elysianfields
on September 20, 2009 at 7:45 AM
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I live by this "motto"...you speak the truth; we all need to move on and become something more than where we are!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 16, 2009 at 7:52 PM
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How beautifully written. A breathtaking haiku. I Love it.
posted by
yellowrose55
on September 14, 2009 at 8:40 PM
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This is one to come back to
posted by
Azur
on September 5, 2009 at 6:45 PM
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There's something to be said for living in the moment.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 2, 2009 at 3:30 PM
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Enjoy! BC-A, Bill’s Avant-Garde Collection
posted by
BC-A
on September 2, 2009 at 7:04 AM
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Another awesome Haiku! How cool to be inspired by another poem, too! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on September 2, 2009 at 5:29 AM
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You captured the essence of what I felt when I wrote that poem :-) You are quite talented my friend... its beautiful xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on September 1, 2009 at 9:50 AM
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I think there is a romance in your life. Secret and with long separations.
posted by
Kabu
on September 1, 2009 at 9:05 AM
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I really like this
You seem in good form after your travel.
posted by
Azur
on August 31, 2009 at 11:52 PM
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The best moment in which to dwell is when he kisses you.
He isn't doing anything else.
You are his whole universe at the moment.
(~a quote that I cannot remember exactly how it goes or who said it)
posted by
TAPS.
on August 31, 2009 at 10:57 PM
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Excellent words Naut!
posted by
merkie
on August 31, 2009 at 8:12 PM
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Naut ~.~
Great haiku! Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on August 31, 2009 at 8:09 PM
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