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Whoa kind of hard your lingo different yet cool smitten by love,u r venting
posted by
Mystereo
on September 17, 2009 at 3:02 PM
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The fragility of love that you portrayed here went well beyond imagination and comprehension! I was forced into a corner as all the thoughts of my past relationships flooded my brain matter! Beautiful and agonizing!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 14, 2009 at 8:55 PM
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TO fall in love so easily Smitten!


posted by
merkie
on September 12, 2009 at 8:27 PM
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Hardilaziz - this is a re-read..wanted to tell you it's lovely.
posted by
shobana
on September 12, 2009 at 5:58 PM
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The close was stupendous! What fine imagery, too! sam


posted by
sam444
on September 12, 2009 at 11:29 AM
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Poetry and love are eternal tools to live. BC-A, Bill’s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on September 11, 2009 at 10:57 PM
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Wah! smitten!
posted by
shamasehar
on September 11, 2009 at 9:38 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on September 11, 2009 at 9:21 PM
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