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"First times" are always something to cherish! If only it could stay that way forever!
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Ryan_Morrow
on September 17, 2009 at 8:46 PM
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FSI - thank you for the visit and glad you felt that way.
posted by
shobana
on September 17, 2009 at 7:04 PM
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Nita - that's great and thank you too for stopping by and liking the poem.
posted by
shobana
on September 17, 2009 at 7:04 PM
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Troosha - I do that a lot..just one line to write something on. That was my inspiration and I am so happy you liked it. thank you for your visit and lovely comment.
posted by
shobana
on September 17, 2009 at 7:03 PM
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Taps - how right you are..singing does makes one happy too. thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on September 17, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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Shamasehar - thank you so much and am glad you felt that way.
posted by
shobana
on September 17, 2009 at 6:55 PM
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9star - thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on September 17, 2009 at 6:54 PM
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Elinjo - ok, I will..thank you so much for your concern dear Elinjo and thank
you for your kind visit.
posted by
shobana
on September 17, 2009 at 6:51 PM
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I find that to be very sound advice.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 17, 2009 at 4:37 PM
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I specially love the ending! Thanks for your visit; I too like the "encounter" law best! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on September 17, 2009 at 9:37 AM
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Shobana
Perhaps like me one line pops into your head and you create a prose or poem around it. When reading this I couldn’t help but think “Serenade the songs that I have sung” might have been your inspiration. In any event it’s a fabulous line as is the entire poem.
posted by
Troosha
on September 17, 2009 at 7:59 AM
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It's difficult to be quiet when one is happy. Bits of songs keep popping into one's head and definitely want out.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 17, 2009 at 6:10 AM
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Sure, your lines lift the spirits & bring peace!
posted by
shamasehar
on September 17, 2009 at 6:00 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on September 17, 2009 at 4:30 AM
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As always a beautiful poem Shobana. Look after yourself and thanks for your visit.
posted by
elinjo
on September 17, 2009 at 3:09 AM
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Thank you Sam.. I am actually, It's a bit quiet here due to the oncoming festive season. So we are off work the whole weekend incl. Monday and Tues. Everyone is rushing home or going somewhere for the holidays!! Happy reading and have a restful night.
posted by
shobana
on September 17, 2009 at 12:08 AM
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Indeed! My son was working on his resume, and helping me build a shelving unit in my garage, and then he had to get his motorcycle out of my way! lol I have been trying to get caught up on my reading and I said I will do whatever it takes! It's 1 am my time. Mountain standard, west coast, U S! I hope you have a fantastic day! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 17, 2009 at 12:02 AM
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Hi Sam,thank you and you're up pretty late today aren't you?
posted by
shobana
on September 16, 2009 at 11:19 PM
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I was think profound, too! Wow! Such poignant imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 16, 2009 at 11:17 PM
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Moon - thank you so much..I'm glad you agree.
posted by
shobana
on September 16, 2009 at 11:17 PM
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...such profound truth..."Hurts will go as time moves on, When you find it's all in the mind"...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on September 16, 2009 at 11:13 PM
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Re: Shobs
Abanerjee - Thank you so much for your kind comment and visit.
posted by
shobana
on September 16, 2009 at 9:19 PM
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Shobs
How serenading can be an all-powerful and all-encompassing, expressed so tellingly.
posted by
anib
on September 16, 2009 at 9:17 PM
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Nileangel - thank you so much for your visit and kind comment.
posted by
shobana
on September 16, 2009 at 7:21 PM
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All in mind, so true. Lovely write.
posted by
Nileangel
on September 16, 2009 at 7:19 PM
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Your poem gives peace and joy to any relationship
Thank you for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 16, 2009 at 5:59 PM
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This really brings peace of mind and makes one feel serene... Great write
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on September 16, 2009 at 5:28 PM
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