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posted by
NighthawkNY
on September 24, 2009 at 7:33 PM
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I would like to think that we are getting better as time forges onward.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 24, 2009 at 5:13 PM
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Perfection can be bought and sold my dear Sinome
who wants to be perfect?? This is superb writing my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on September 24, 2009 at 3:14 AM
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Sinome
I think perfection
is a myth, but a
necessary one, speaking of that which is always just beyond our reach, but
making us reach...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 23, 2009 at 7:26 PM
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Perfect? No! But, even with the bitter cold of winter and the blazing heat of summer, I love the seasons--all of them. As one progresses into another I joy that I'm still here for the advent of the next.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 23, 2009 at 7:05 PM
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Ponderous and Poignant...I know I'm imperfect yet enjoy attaining each step...I recall in a chemistry/biology lecture one time a professor speaking of how when a cell perfects itself it dies...Oy! I think that was the exact moment I quit this particular class - thinking I would not want to perfect myself, in order to continue living...
~ Life is good and I love simple! and so enjoy your poetry, Sinome ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 23, 2009 at 9:12 AM
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What a beautiful poem
as if you are playing with the beauty of nature
Thank you for sharing this poem especially your last lines.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 23, 2009 at 7:37 AM
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Wonderful
Your poetry is always gorgeous, but this is more so that ever. I personally believe that perfection is an idea that we all pursue and hope never to attain.
posted by
lionreign
on September 23, 2009 at 7:36 AM
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Nature is indeed God's most perfect creation! Lovely poem!
posted by
Nita09
on September 23, 2009 at 5:58 AM
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wow!
posted by
Star5_
on September 23, 2009 at 4:55 AM
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Thank goodness for the constants in life! I thought this was splendid for in it is a great lesson of change and its acceptance to be a complement to those things that are constant in our lives! Love this one, Sweetie! Love you, too! sammie
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on September 23, 2009 at 3:14 AM
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How true Sinome..no matter what the sun will always shine just the same. Thanks so much for your encouraging and lovely comment and it's good to see you commenting once again.
posted by
shobana
on September 23, 2009 at 1:32 AM
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