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Very nice indeed!
posted by
Nita09
on September 26, 2009 at 6:57 AM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on September 25, 2009 at 9:17 PM
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thats a long time
posted by
Lanetay
on September 25, 2009 at 9:10 PM
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beautiful and so settling!
posted by
Ariala
on September 25, 2009 at 6:19 PM
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I find this to be incredibly romantic.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 25, 2009 at 6:16 PM
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So very hopeful of achieving 'love'. Did you consider that it might be a process of growing to love rather than falling in love!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 25, 2009 at 5:04 PM
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The night means so many things to so many people.
I just came from reading Ryan_Morrow's poem about night patrol in the desert.
I love the night, but in some places in our city night brings gunshots and sirens.
Your poem here brings out the best of the night.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 25, 2009 at 7:45 AM
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This one is special
I am totally blown away by it - utterly fabulous in both form and content, well done, my dear!
posted by
lionreign
on September 25, 2009 at 5:44 AM
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Sinome, this is a very romantic poem
Keep on the good work
Chuck
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 25, 2009 at 3:58 AM
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Beautifully described Sinome
that feeling of forever in safety and warmth that is love; lovely write my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on September 25, 2009 at 3:19 AM
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Beautiful words of love Sinome. Just lovely.
posted by
shobana
on September 25, 2009 at 12:04 AM
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so nicely put it together...
posted by
Star5_
on September 24, 2009 at 9:35 PM
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J Who would want more love? To illustrate passionate love poets have chosen the stars for their imagery since the first night that people loved. Your poem touched me. BC-A, Bill’s RoostJ
posted by
BC-A
on September 24, 2009 at 9:06 PM
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Sinome
Silence, know him better in darkness, will love him till the stars burn away, to eternity. Sentimental, philosophic, extremely sweet, a fabulous expression with an appeal of the immediate
xoxo.
posted by
anib
on September 24, 2009 at 8:53 PM
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This was very well executed, Sinome! "till the stars all burn away" sealed the deal for me!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 24, 2009 at 8:30 PM
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beautiful...
posted by
NighthawkNY
on September 24, 2009 at 8:27 PM
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