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Deep!!! connecting the dots! The tie that binds us all together is invisible but endless and strong!I love your poems Marta!
posted by
merkie
on September 29, 2009 at 10:12 AM
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and why do so many men think it shameful to cry? It took me a long time
to break out of this mode of thinking (it was strictly my upbringing) and let the tears flow when necessary.
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posted by
Rumor
on September 29, 2009 at 9:27 AM
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Fantastic!
Your work is so vivid, so precise in it's expression that I lose myself in it's gentle rhythms and emotions. Brilliant!
posted by
lionreign
on September 29, 2009 at 6:55 AM
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Very true...many, and some of the best things, are unseen!
posted by
Nita09
on September 29, 2009 at 4:15 AM
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It feels like a lyric poem but then I think ballad with a the voice of a dramatic monologue! Either way it is awesome, poignant and cuts to the soul! Excellent! And for your mostest, again, I leave you with Mercury! sammie
xoxoxo O, perhaps, Pluto!
posted by
sam444
on September 28, 2009 at 9:29 PM
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How lovely..it touches the soul Sinome.(the emoticons are not working again sweetie but a precious rose for you)
posted by
shobana
on September 28, 2009 at 7:13 PM
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BEAUTIFUL
posted by
Nileangel
on September 28, 2009 at 7:09 PM
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Sinome
'...to ignore the tears
that make your eyes shine,
in the mistaken belief that men don't cry,'
You not only write beautifully, you are so full of knowledge of humanity I am always astounded at the depth of you and what you understand about emotions.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 28, 2009 at 6:36 PM
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Sinome
Understanding whenever it comes changes the soul, it grows, it is saddened or gladdened but it is changed forever. Lovely as is usual. God bless you dear one. You have made xoxoxox a staple on here.
posted by
Justi
on September 28, 2009 at 6:34 PM
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So do I Formerstudentintern ... I prefer immediate understanding but alas its not always possible loll
posted by
Sinome
on September 28, 2009 at 4:45 PM
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I much prefer immediate understanding.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 28, 2009 at 4:35 PM
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oh dear!
posted by
Star5_
on September 28, 2009 at 4:05 PM
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this is as a song ~ a touching song with a loving melody ~ touches my heart
xoxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 28, 2009 at 3:55 PM
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very touching
posted by
Samantha39
on September 28, 2009 at 3:46 PM
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What a poem. Makes me have goose bumps.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 28, 2009 at 8:14 AM
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