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Re: Where is going to sing???? It's so beautiful....
Thanks 9Star. I'm not sure but he may sing it. He sounds like Neil Diamond!
posted by
SpitFire70
on October 8, 2009 at 2:06 PM
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Glad you like it, TAPS.
I wrote the lyrics for my brother, so who knows!
posted by
SpitFire70
on October 8, 2009 at 2:05 PM
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Where is going to sing???? It's so beautiful....
posted by
Star5_
on October 8, 2009 at 1:33 PM
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Great lyrics. Wish we could hear the music.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 8, 2009 at 9:20 AM
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Thanks, Mandalee!
posted by
SpitFire70
on October 7, 2009 at 12:47 PM
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good song.
posted by
Amanda__
on October 6, 2009 at 2:58 PM
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Yellowrose,
Thanks for reading this! I totally dig that title!
posted by
SpitFire70
on October 6, 2009 at 11:38 AM
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BC-A,
So great to hear from you and thank you a million for the very kind comments. Glad you like this. Promise to catch up soon!
posted by
SpitFire70
on October 6, 2009 at 11:37 AM
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Hi, Merkie!
Thanks for your input here! Great to see you, too!
posted by
SpitFire70
on October 6, 2009 at 11:36 AM
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Aww, Sam!!! I miss you too!
That was so sweet of you. You have no idea how much that comment means to me. Feeling a bit blue these days and that actually cheered me up. Thank you! Oh, and I like the title! I promise I will be writing here more and will catch up with you and others! xoxo
posted by
SpitFire70
on October 6, 2009 at 11:35 AM
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The song flows nicely and I feel the "ache".
Song Title? "Yesterdays Rain"
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 5, 2009 at 11:45 PM
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I'm walkin’ this road like a blind man defeated
Just wanderin’; come what may.
I like the way it goes. It seems to make this point. I think that it does without boring the reader and listener. You write good stuff love. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on October 5, 2009 at 8:29 PM
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Hey Spitfire good to see you again. I agree with sam's title choice! Great lyrics for your brother.
posted by
merkie
on October 5, 2009 at 7:36 PM
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Very kewl lyrics! I will submit,
Searching for Yesterday! HOW THE HELL ARE YOU? I miss you so much!!!!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 5, 2009 at 4:35 PM
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