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Very good advice in this lovely poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 8, 2009 at 6:30 PM
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Thankyou all for your great comments, they bless my creativity, letting me know people appreciate what's in my soul. Blessed Be All.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 8, 2009 at 4:09 PM
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I agree
I agree with the other comments. I really liked this one. It tells what we should do, at least to find our peace.
Really great entry.
posted by
kasperhoe
on October 8, 2009 at 10:30 AM
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Positive and good thinking
thank you for sharing. Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 8, 2009 at 5:13 AM
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Furthermore . . .
It shows a cleear understanding of what needs to be done and a guideline for behavior and clean thinking one needs in order to gradually transform the world and make it what was intended to be. This follows and enriches us all with the meaning derived from the charge of the Goddess/God.
Blessed be . . .
posted by
crimsonrovereeducation
on October 7, 2009 at 8:28 PM
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Amizing
This is one of the best spiritually charged poems I have ever read. It is compelling, driving to a higher level of understanding of what it really means to be rooted in the solemnity of Nature. The evidence one feels illustrated in this text overwhelms the reader with a sense of peace and true hope.
Blessed be . . .
posted by
crimsonrovereeducation
on October 7, 2009 at 8:23 PM
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...somewhere along the way, people learn to put it into the future, in the distance...unatainable...not so...just do it...now, this moment...and the next...and the next...very well written...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on October 7, 2009 at 8:12 PM
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Hey cpklapper, I mean wondering. I need an editor. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 7, 2009 at 12:44 PM
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INNER VOICE
From your lips to God's ear! Almost a psalm/prayer.
joab
posted by
joab3
on October 7, 2009 at 10:48 AM
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Re: Lovely thoughts
cpklapper, thankyou so much, I was wandering which usage to use, hope that ones right. Much appreciated and the poem ends at the copyright notice, the last lines are just a blessing sent to all. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 7, 2009 at 8:12 AM
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Thankyou all so much, so glad you all enjoyed. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 7, 2009 at 8:09 AM
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Lovely thoughts
but "tis not
too late" and you have "angle" rather than "angel" further down. Also, does the poem end at the copyright notice or after the last lines?
A Wandering Editor
posted by
cpklapper
on October 7, 2009 at 7:16 AM
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Excellent message
beautifully written - great poem!
posted by
lionreign
on October 7, 2009 at 5:27 AM
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Yes lets start now! How positive! Wish each word comes true!
posted by
shamasehar
on October 7, 2009 at 12:35 AM
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How lovely Nileangel..absolutely divine. thanks so much for stopping by and your lovely comment.
posted by
shobana
on October 6, 2009 at 8:37 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 6, 2009 at 8:03 PM
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~very lovely ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 6, 2009 at 7:39 PM
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"
Transform your beast/feed it peace." - have to remember this every day at work! 
posted by
NighthawkNY
on October 6, 2009 at 7:31 PM
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