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This one I really like. It seems to be a conclusion to a long process anyone who has loved goes thru. So where are you going to go (or leap to) next?
posted by
jfm32
on October 12, 2009 at 5:20 PM
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you did it again with poignant words
posted by
merkie
on October 12, 2009 at 8:44 AM
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This poem makes me feel sad.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 11, 2009 at 3:22 PM
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Beautifully written, as always. Hope you're doing well. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on October 11, 2009 at 9:55 AM
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But how does that help that he knows that you cannot forget?
posted by
Straightforward
on October 11, 2009 at 7:38 AM
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I’ve done this, love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 11, 2009 at 7:08 AM
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Sinome
How very powerful and a secret which seems to be backed by strength.....
posted by
Troosha
on October 11, 2009 at 7:04 AM
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how utterly touching ~ the end ---- the pith of this whole poem ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 10, 2009 at 10:05 PM
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Wow. I've not thought about it much, but that is true. While the emotions fade, the memories don't always accompany them....perhaps we have the memories minus the emotions; and that's why they don't hurt to recall anymore...? (Thinking on keyboard, here. Very good to be this thought provoking, thank you...!)
posted by
Darson
on October 10, 2009 at 7:43 PM
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We have missed you but here you are back. Your poems are sometimes very mysterious. Enjoyed reading 
. Chuck
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 10, 2009 at 4:50 PM
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Sinome
I'm not sure I could do that with one I had loved, but your poem is another story and beautiful, just as you usually make them.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 10, 2009 at 3:58 PM
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Wow! Awesome poem.
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
on October 10, 2009 at 1:25 PM
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I've been wondering where you were and hoping you were not ill.
There is surely truth in that poem, especially the last couple of lines.
Well done!
posted by
TAPS.
on October 10, 2009 at 11:10 AM
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