Go to So There.
- Add a comment
- Go to I've Been Waiting For This
sam444
...longing....yes, I think that's correct. We women seem to have a limit as to how long we can go without romance...not the physical kind, but the more direct, brain-candy that comes from a well-timed compiment or a flirty look...we know when we're due and then the longing does set in. You're right.
posted by
Darson
on October 12, 2009 at 5:14 PM
| link to this | reply
An excellent rendition of preoccupation and the longing! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 12, 2009 at 1:58 PM
| link to this | reply
Kabu
Thank you, I agree. I believe that almost anything can be revived, with some effort! I'm a hopeless (make that hope-full) romantic.
posted by
Darson
on October 11, 2009 at 11:44 AM
| link to this | reply
TAPS
...You didn't! I accidentally put it into opinion, not the poetry section...in trying to cut and paste I removed and deleted! Not intentional. Will see if I can re-create it....inspired by a VERY weird dream I had this morning...it took a while for me to come out of it, it was bad, and so realistic...ever have dreams like that? Thank you, as always, Taps!
posted by
Darson
on October 11, 2009 at 11:42 AM
| link to this | reply
I do hope he didbut sometimes love fades or is aloud by one or both to
becomemundane. So sad when love dies. or is killed.
posted by
Kabu
on October 11, 2009 at 11:16 AM
| link to this | reply
Beautiful. It does seem that year by year, some men's passion seems to cool and they begin to take all things for granted, not realizing that women need that continued passionate assurance.
I was just reading a newly posted writing of yours and it just disappeared on me and is not there now. I hope I didn't do it. 
posted by
TAPS.
on October 11, 2009 at 7:48 AM
| link to this | reply
Troosha
posted by
Darson
on October 11, 2009 at 7:26 AM
| link to this | reply
chuck ibrahim
Thank You, Chuck!
posted by
Darson
on October 11, 2009 at 7:25 AM
| link to this | reply
elysianfields
posted by
Darson
on October 11, 2009 at 7:24 AM
| link to this | reply
9STAR
Thank you.
posted by
Darson
on October 11, 2009 at 7:24 AM
| link to this | reply
Darson
How poignant and I suspect we’ve all had a yearning moment such as this at one time or another. Great write!
posted by
Troosha
on October 11, 2009 at 7:06 AM
| link to this | reply
Very touching and very romantic

thanks for sharing. Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 11, 2009 at 6:29 AM
| link to this | reply

--- love speaks in many languages and in silence as well ~ this touched my heart.

Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 11, 2009 at 5:49 AM
| link to this | reply
wow!
posted by
Star5_
on October 10, 2009 at 8:07 PM
| link to this | reply