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I don't think it should have been disclosed! But we are so judgmental at times! Excellent post! It is actually a bit more common than I had thought among older women! I had recently read an article in MORE magazine regarding this issue! Shelly

posted by sam444 on October 14, 2009 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

wow I hadn't thought about the older lady story before,but I think it
would be best never to tell people who it isn't their business anyway. Kids are soooooo judgemental.

posted by Kabu on October 14, 2009 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

Very interesting read.  It's really quite a common thing it seems. 

posted by TAPS. on October 14, 2009 at 4:42 PM | link to this | reply

This is powerful, Elinjo. A great read, thank you.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on October 14, 2009 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I've had several friends who discovered late in life why they'd been so
I've known some to! When I was about 20 I had a very good-looking boy-friend, who was also intelligent and very courteous. He took me home to meet his family and they made a great fuss of me. However he never held my hand or kissed me, which I thought was a bit too well-bred. We have remained friends and years later he confessed to me that he was gay. The saddest part of the story IMO is that he never, ever dared to take the consequences and find a partner

posted by elinjo on October 14, 2009 at 1:50 PM | link to this | reply

I love the plot twists that have been happening. They're keeping me on my toes.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 14, 2009 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

This is so very interesting! Hope all's well.

posted by Nita09 on October 14, 2009 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

I've had several friends who discovered late in life why they'd been so

miserable in their marriages. They loved their children, in some cases had them "stolen" by the husband and the legal system. We make some mighty big assumptions, especially about family. The answer to your riddle is a perfect surprise, almost obvious once we know it.  Very realistic dialog here, shows your characters' homophobia perfectly.

   Write on!

posted by Pat_B on October 14, 2009 at 4:25 AM | link to this | reply

Great dialogue.
Betty, this story is great, keep at it. I like your little anecdote about older woman learning they are actually lesbian.

posted by Hackthorne19 on October 14, 2009 at 1:20 AM | link to this | reply

There is an element of suspense there which is good Elinjo..a good story taking shape.

posted by shobana on October 14, 2009 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply