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A lot can happen in a quiet place. So unique and very thought provoking.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 22, 2009 at 11:26 PM
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Oh my
… there’s a lot here. Excellent, no? BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 22, 2009 at 9:16 AM
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You're right. Azur's blog is very evocative. Especially that one.
As for your poem: Haiku or not Haiku, that is the question.
posted by
Pat_B
on October 22, 2009 at 7:20 AM
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I agree with Shelly on this one Naut ~ western forms are more liberal ~ I think this is cool ~ and powerful thought --- as Shelly said, go on and have another titch of scotch
---- GNight (me and my warm milk
) ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 21, 2009 at 9:28 PM
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I would classify this as a Western version of a Haiku! One does not have to observe the accent on using nature! I would say it is all Canadian! And by all means, Naut, have another scotch! lol Shelly
Shall I join you? lol
posted by
sam444
on October 21, 2009 at 9:01 PM
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Personally I enjoyed this blog with a metaphysical subject. The way I looked it you've broken new ground.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 21, 2009 at 12:01 PM
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it always amazes me how so few words give so much to think on.
posted by
RomaKay
on October 21, 2009 at 6:20 AM
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Haiku often uses nature, but I would suggest it is rarely about nature,
As with yours, it is often about human nature.
posted by
Ciel
on October 21, 2009 at 5:34 AM
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Honestly I'm not qualified to judge whether this is a bona fide haiku or not. However what appeals to me is the way you reflected on another blogger's blog and came up with this one. IMO this is one of the things that makes Blogit a pleasant place to hang out.
posted by
elinjo
on October 21, 2009 at 1:56 AM
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It may not be haiku but it is your own expression and I love writing three-liners too- haiku or no haiku!
posted by
hardilaziz
on October 20, 2009 at 9:18 PM
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I guess I need a Scotch cos .............
posted by
Kabu
on October 20, 2009 at 9:17 PM
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I loved it Naut... and hey... being animals, we humans are very much part of Nature, so your Haiku is technically quite correct :-) xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on October 20, 2009 at 9:14 PM
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Another good one...
hey Naut, lawyers can be imaginative too...hahaha, good night! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on October 20, 2009 at 8:31 PM
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You could remove just one little "o" and make it a perfect haiku with a word from nature.
(turn logos into logs - HAHAHAHA)
posted by
TAPS.
on October 20, 2009 at 8:27 PM
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Nautikos - I think the haiku is good though...enjoy the scotch.
posted by
shobana
on October 20, 2009 at 8:15 PM
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