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Teardrops turn to embrace the day, love this one Merkie.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 24, 2009 at 9:59 AM
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Oh this shares such palpable cadence - rhythm and boom like imagery ~ Great write - wonderful poem
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 22, 2009 at 9:22 PM
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Terrific imagery!
posted by
Nita09
on October 22, 2009 at 10:49 AM
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Amazing post my friend
superbly written and another timely one for me! Many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on October 22, 2009 at 9:29 AM
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Am I sick? I like melancholic poems love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 22, 2009 at 8:49 AM
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great poem, with a great attitude
and a killer last line!
posted by
lionreign
on October 22, 2009 at 7:34 AM
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Merkie
Oh, those rainy days and how they toy with our frame of mind. I like how you ended with melancholy departing “on the dark steed” though. Thanks for visiting my blog, reading, and leaving several comments. I enjoy it when someone drops in and reads several days of my posts – I envision you sitting there soaking in my words and thoughts and it’s a lovely mental image.
posted by
Troosha
on October 22, 2009 at 7:03 AM
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Teardrop of Dismay
'the dark steed of morose mindless moments!' Sublime!
posted by
2Philomena
on October 22, 2009 at 4:40 AM
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Margaret - Such a beautiful imagery "Look up and breathe the colors" 
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 22, 2009 at 3:01 AM
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And now, tear of joy can emerge! Wonderful imagery! I was captivated! sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on October 21, 2009 at 9:02 PM
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love the line - look up and breathe the colors! well done.
posted by
janey_
on October 21, 2009 at 8:26 PM
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Dance into the rainy storm, nice. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 21, 2009 at 7:37 PM
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Yes, depression/melancholy is a very common affliction for a lot of people.
It is good to help each other through it.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 21, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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The weather did affect me today; so I'm not alone...?
posted by
Darson
on October 21, 2009 at 4:32 PM
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Nowit has started to rain . It was cold all day.these words say it all.
posted by
Kabu
on October 21, 2009 at 3:10 PM
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merkie, melancholy reminds me of how anyone, especially those with
S.A.D. or other forms of depression can pull us down...all we can do is keep looking up, and as you say, "breathe in the colors"...
...
posted by
Rumor
on October 21, 2009 at 12:34 PM
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