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posted by
hardilaziz
on October 23, 2009 at 10:02 AM
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powerful lines!
after all, what does one more stain matter? (everything, I think...) great post
posted by
lionreign
on October 23, 2009 at 8:09 AM
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That's a poignant call for an end! sam


posted by
sam444
on October 23, 2009 at 4:29 AM
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...........yaad aa gaya .......lines from an old hindi song............iss dil mein abhi aur bhi zakhmon ki jaagha hai.......
posted by
shamasehar
on October 22, 2009 at 9:56 PM
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hardilaziz
Not a great thought to sleep on......but expressive...
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 22, 2009 at 9:42 PM
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very scary is this symbolic of deep pain inflicted by someone or expected?
posted by
Kabu
on October 22, 2009 at 6:55 PM
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This is so deep...and I must admit, trying to translate it, I am wanting to understand...

Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 22, 2009 at 6:44 PM
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Wonderful expression ....
posted by
afzal50
on October 22, 2009 at 5:58 PM
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That's intense...Had to read it more then once.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 22, 2009 at 4:50 PM
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This is really making me think. In the Gnostic gospels, there's a story of Jesus tellinmg someone to take his sword and push it through a wall. I have no idea what it means!!
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on October 22, 2009 at 11:14 AM
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Star5_
on October 22, 2009 at 6:59 AM
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