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You depict a very intricate image of being imprisoned in a difficult relationship.
posted by
2Philomena
on October 23, 2009 at 10:12 AM
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Geat advice
beautifull presented... this is such a wise poem, love, that I am quite awed by it
posted by
lionreign
on October 23, 2009 at 8:07 AM
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Amen! Release the ties that bind and get out there and experience lif e with gusto! Everything you said at my blog about the Milky Way and such, all I can say is times 2~ Gotcha, for the moment! Are you recovering nicely, my darlin' Sinome! And of the other thing with the grocery cart, is that one okay? Love you Sweetie! sammie
posted by
sam444
on October 23, 2009 at 5:40 AM
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Sinome, true awareness and beauty are woven passionately throughout your poem.
I carried a knot like that once.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 22, 2009 at 9:38 PM
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Sinome ~.~
Wonderful write...great imagery! Sound, wise advice -- though more easily said than done. Thanks so much for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 22, 2009 at 6:01 PM
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Those knots are tough to get rid of.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 22, 2009 at 5:29 PM
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Dear Sinome ~ what a pain this is --- that you describe. Agony, long-suffering pain. I have been there. It can hold the heart captive. The bleeding you speak of --- from the time it takes to work through it, 'til resolve - until liberty comes, is poignant. This whole poem is so intense it 'bleeds' ~ I tip my pen to you with my
xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 22, 2009 at 3:38 PM
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Sinome
I know of those knots you speak of and isn’t it freeing when we finally untie them!
posted by
Troosha
on October 22, 2009 at 12:47 PM
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The last two lines are very true, difficult as it might be to follow.
posted by
Nita09
on October 22, 2009 at 10:06 AM
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Ironically that’s life love. Eh
BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 22, 2009 at 10:04 AM
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I guess you're making a pertinent suggestion, but it's one that's very
difficult to follow
posted by
Straightforward
on October 22, 2009 at 9:35 AM
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