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Re: Sinome
This is one pat on my back that I'll take delight from and bask in its warmth, my friend Marta. I so greatly value your readership and effusive comments.Wow! me the critic surpassed the critiqued
-:) xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:59 AM
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Re: Good day, Abanerjee
It's so very sweet of you, kind of you to be sending me
s upon
s. Life is so rich indeed, richer beyond our perceptions. Emptying the mind we become receptive and appreciative of God's gift, and this quality you have in abundance. Thank you Elyse from the bottom of my
. As I was just saying to snowview, it was a most gartifying effort, albeit enjoyable, for me.
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:52 AM
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Re: snowview
I felt immensely gartified having done these two parts. I thank you value your readership and encouragements.
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:44 AM
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Re: yellowrose55
I am so glad you found the analogy wonderful and the vastness of the skies all-pervading.
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:41 AM
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Re: merkie
I glad that you see these qualities and so are your poetic perceptions, too, profound. Many thanks for yur visit and for commenting.
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:39 AM
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Re: magic_moon
Didn't I say earlier moon that this signature is so telling without so much as bringing words into picture. Am ever grateful to you for your readership.
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:35 AM
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Re: Kabu
To be able to make one's fears and worries fleeting and petty is a great achievement that poets do more easily than prose writers.
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:32 AM
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Re: WileyJohn
Poetry is that medium of the connect.
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:29 AM
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Re: Darson
I always wanted to be a deep sea diver, and I am so glad you liked my diving ... to your brain's satisfaction.
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:27 AM
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Re: BC-A
"Apathy changes forms in the evolution of thought" is so true and I loved the observation. Thank you.
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:24 AM
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Re: shobana
Thanxalot Ms S, you're always so full of praise that it is endearing and so motivating for my doing even better. I really enjoyed the elaboration.
posted by
anib
on October 25, 2009 at 6:21 AM
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Awesome poem abanerjee and I somehow understand the predicament the poet was in and her vision. The clouds sailing and life passing over should never be a contention for one. wonderful explanation and insight as usual.
posted by
shobana
on October 25, 2009 at 4:06 AM
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Apathy changes forms in the evolution of thought. The solid remnants of nature stay behind after our thoughts are superseded by the next generations. The broader generation gap lies in forms that change with the ages love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 24, 2009 at 11:13 PM
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You are soooo deep. It's some seriously satisfying reading for my brain.
posted by
Darson
on October 24, 2009 at 8:21 PM
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abanerjee
Love the connection of rock and cloud....
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 24, 2009 at 6:57 PM
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fantastic my friend I soenjoyed both the poem and what you have written
It somehow makes our fears and worries fleeting and petty.
posted by
Kabu
on October 24, 2009 at 6:44 PM
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Both Cloud's posts are amazing my friend... Points well taken and great analysis of a nice poem. This is one case in my opinion the critic surpassed the critiqued :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on October 24, 2009 at 12:02 PM
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posted by
magic_moon
on October 24, 2009 at 10:22 AM
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To live in this time capsule is the moement of the person and the death into a flight of unknown territoy and retaining consciosness is the aadvancement beyond the moment. Grand perceptions in your analogy!Thank you!
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posted by
merkie
on October 24, 2009 at 9:46 AM
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It's a wonderful analogy. The sky reaches everywhere and it's the air we breath.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 24, 2009 at 9:25 AM
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Thanks for the second part, and thanks too for your visit.
posted by
Nita09
on October 24, 2009 at 7:55 AM
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Good day, Abanerjee
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yes I found this poem as melancholic and philosophical as well as amazing in its allegory and imagery ~ Inspiring!!!!
It's amazing the depth that comes from a poetic's medium ~ the muse speaks here from such depth that its truly another great one for you to bring light upon!!! Great find and as equal great thoughts brought to ponder...what a great reward
upon
and Elyse off to ponder them clouds, life and all that God grants today - life's rich and I want to open up some gifts ~
no matter ~ clouds grace the space of Heavenly realm and I aim to reflect their "face" ~
posted by
elysianfields
on October 24, 2009 at 7:39 AM
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