Go to Martas poems
- Add a comment
- Go to I walk and I think...
Those past experiences make us who we are.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 28, 2009 at 7:17 PM
| link to this | reply
Memories are hard to dispel; very well expressed! Thanks very much for your visits. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on October 28, 2009 at 9:14 AM
| link to this | reply
such beautiful sadness
and tender melancholy, you write as only you can, sincere and heartbreaking
posted by
lionreign
on October 28, 2009 at 8:22 AM
| link to this | reply
invading my mind
reminding me that the only thing flying is time.
Amazing poem! I particularly like the lines above.
posted by
calia14
on October 28, 2009 at 4:47 AM
| link to this | reply
Sinome
Very melancholy luv, certainly well expressed emotion of the loss of a loving relationship
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 27, 2009 at 9:44 PM
| link to this | reply
LOL SORRY THIS IS A LOVELY POEM BUT I COULDN'T HELP THINKING
THAT MY MIND IS OFTEN BLANK AND THEN I HAD TO SETTLE DOWN TO ENJOY YOUR WORK.
posted by
Kabu
on October 27, 2009 at 8:57 PM
| link to this | reply
posted by
Star5_
on October 27, 2009 at 8:52 PM
| link to this | reply
"This world's no blot for us Nor blank;
it means intensely, and means good:
To find its meaning is my meat and drink." -Browning, Robert
posted by
TAPS.
on October 27, 2009 at 8:45 PM
| link to this | reply
The sad cloud around you is apparent in your poem- moistens my eyes Marta-a fine write!
posted by
merkie
on October 27, 2009 at 8:27 PM
| link to this | reply
Sad yet beautiful, well done. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 27, 2009 at 7:22 PM
| link to this | reply
This is awesome Sinome. Many thoughts are appeased by just walking in the forest and taking in its beauty and reminiscing. I just wish there were no sad thoughts though.
posted by
shobana
on October 27, 2009 at 6:27 PM
| link to this | reply
This is so awesome Sweetie! I miss your imagery so much when I am off for a couple of days! I loved the close with I walk and I think! Even though melancholy it did set the stage for thinking and walking that would bring resolve! Wonderful continuity, too! sammie loves you as many spins as the earth has made since its inception! Such a long, long time love it like I love you! sammie
xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on October 27, 2009 at 5:52 PM
| link to this | reply