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Thank you for sharing. In any event you make a good analogy between thunder and brainstorming I think. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on October 30, 2009 at 5:41 PM
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Sinome
Perhaps thunder and rain at another point in life, reminds you of a sad time and it just gets poeticized right out of the psyche luv. We love ya
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 30, 2009 at 2:51 PM
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I was taken by the thunder as well! What a conclusion! Love you! sammie
posted by
sam444
on October 30, 2009 at 10:18 AM
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Rolling thunder. I can't even explain what the sound does to me. It isn't just the sound, but the whole atmosphere that goes with it--the color of the sky, the heaviness of the air, the silence of everything else, the suggested force of the advancing storm.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 29, 2009 at 11:09 PM
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We had such storms back in the summer this poem makes me wish for one.
posted by
Kabu
on October 29, 2009 at 9:26 PM
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~ I love the Thunder and tonight it has been so...Your pen is gilded, gifted Sinome and this, yet another gift to share ~ I tell you, you're a Star that lingers, a Moonbeam that lights every shadow - yes, poignant by the end, but the passion you bring carries me away towards the Light ~
~ Elyse
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elysianfields
on October 29, 2009 at 9:22 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 29, 2009 at 8:49 PM
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Oh, how I can relate. Beautifully expressed...
posted by
RomaKay
on October 29, 2009 at 8:47 PM
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Sinome
Oh this is a beautifully sad poem. Your pen brings out those sad lines to be washed out of your knowning by the soft and beautiful rain. Let them go with the rain!
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Justi
on October 29, 2009 at 8:41 PM
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Star5_
on October 29, 2009 at 8:40 PM
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Star5_
on October 29, 2009 at 8:40 PM
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