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having evolved into a sailor, why would you need a tail?
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 16, 2009 at 8:48 AM
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hmmm....seaborne --- would it be a clam or an anemone?
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 1, 2009 at 8:03 PM
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Now this is an effective little thing. I like the element of surprise in it. It leaves you with an image of the aquatic narrator. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 31, 2009 at 11:22 PM
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You said genesis, aka the beginning! Then I thought of mythology! Now I am going to settle in on the mussel because you have been on vacation and I know what they did to small inland lake I raised my kids on! They are guileless! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on October 31, 2009 at 4:41 PM
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Re: TAPS
Makes sense to me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 31, 2009 at 3:27 PM
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Nautikos
So that's what Haiku is all about, not understanding it eh? Oh, Seagulls? LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 30, 2009 at 10:35 PM
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Oh of course I thought of everything else. Silly me.
posted by
Kabu
on October 30, 2009 at 9:54 PM
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Sounds like penguins to me. They are so cute.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 30, 2009 at 9:27 PM
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I can't think what it is.
posted by
Kabu
on October 30, 2009 at 7:49 PM
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