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Its Cold Outside
Beautiful images! Well done.
posted by
SFJoseph
on November 8, 2009 at 12:16 PM
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"but baby it's cold outside" --- I'm humming that song after reading this...Just beautiful --- melodic and warmth to my
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 7, 2009 at 7:51 PM
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I know what you mean.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 7, 2009 at 5:44 PM
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posted by
skye08
on November 7, 2009 at 3:22 PM
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yep you said it all here and it sure is cold outside.
posted by
Kabu
on November 7, 2009 at 2:35 PM
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You've got it all down exactly right. Except, we have an unusually warm spell here right now--mid seventies and brilliant sunshine. Even the night didn't get cold last night. But, cold is coming. I feel it in my bones.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 7, 2009 at 11:59 AM
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Glad to be inside where dreams flourish! Shivers in the cold brrr
posted by
merkie
on November 7, 2009 at 9:30 AM
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Originally romantic and meteorological love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 7, 2009 at 4:18 AM
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Awesome imagery! And I think it will continue to puzzle man indefinitely! It is cold! sammie
posted by
sam444
on November 7, 2009 at 3:51 AM
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It may be cold outside, but your beautiful words warm the heart. I just love it that the ocean is never amiss in your poems. Hope we can meet after I come back from the cruise.
posted by
vogue
on November 7, 2009 at 1:37 AM
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Excellent imagery Sinome
and a beautifully written piece of work my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on November 7, 2009 at 12:09 AM
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Chilling
posted by
calia14
on November 6, 2009 at 9:38 PM
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sooooooooo booooootiful
posted by
Star5_
on November 6, 2009 at 9:31 PM
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Sinome
The use of the adjective "shamelessly caressing" for Northly winds, the clear skies, the stark trees, dead leaves, and you walking through, creates a background that can only be called awesome, my fine poetess friend xoxoxo - :)
posted by
anib
on November 6, 2009 at 9:10 PM
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