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HAPPY THANKSGIVING SINOME
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 25, 2009 at 6:43 PM
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Sinome
People find comfort, insipiration and ,sometimes, understanding in different places. I can see why a beach like the one you described can be so special but I have lost the connection that I used to have to seasides even thought I had lived on the sea front for 16 years as a child...
posted by
lindo
on November 24, 2009 at 1:42 PM
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I liked the conclusion so much! It was an eye opener for me! Love you my dear friend! sammie
posted by
sam444
on November 24, 2009 at 8:54 AM
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Very soothing!
posted by
Nita09
on November 24, 2009 at 7:24 AM
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Thank you for taking me away to such a wonderful place.
posted by
skye08
on November 24, 2009 at 1:35 AM
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...the finite merging with the infinite? moon
posted by
magic_moon
on November 23, 2009 at 11:31 PM
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Sinome thank you for taking me to your place of solitude, reflection and peace --- I feel the ebb and flow of the waters --- I feel the actual slow soft movement. So moving, evocative and so Sinome - gorgeous poetry xoxoxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 23, 2009 at 10:08 PM
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beautiful - i feel just like this when I'm sitting outside in my garden - thanks
posted by
janey_
on November 23, 2009 at 9:36 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful and I go to that place too and understand the other life......
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 23, 2009 at 8:46 PM
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Sinome
The point where the river drop meets the ocean, the drop becomes the ocean itself,merging with vastness. This thought is so very exquisitely brought out in your poem. Excellent! and that is the domain from where you often write, xoxoxo
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posted by
anib
on November 23, 2009 at 8:30 PM
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The sea shore with the waves rolling in breaking in an eternal cycle
yes the perfect place to understand. This is so beautiful.
posted by
Kabu
on November 23, 2009 at 8:16 PM
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very beautiful
being at the shore can be healing
posted by
jeansaw
on November 23, 2009 at 8:12 PM
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