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elysianfields
I am so glad Ely that I seem to be coming of age, and commendations from you and other great of poetry gives me the charge that one day I can emulate such greats. Thank you ever so much.



~ Aba
posted by
anib
on December 4, 2009 at 7:00 PM
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ABA!

Man oH Man but this is more than good, it's great ~ and I especially was moved by this:
Man, you talk like fanatic terrorists
Out to outdo one another in revenge
But did you not learn
That it hurts the more
That’s out seeking only to avenge
You have wisdom to share my dear Aba ~ write on!!! Please --- 

~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 4, 2009 at 12:03 AM
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lindo
You're right, not m y usual fare, but that you did enjoy is saying a lot to me in encouragement. Many thanks for your readership, whenever you do.
posted by
anib
on December 3, 2009 at 10:00 PM
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snowview
Thank you so much, ma'am.
posted by
anib
on December 3, 2009 at 9:58 PM
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TAPS
That is indeed the most wise course adopted by the wise and discerning.
posted by
anib
on December 3, 2009 at 9:57 PM
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Kabu
So glad I am that this brought afresh memories of your dad. You are kind and so encouraging for me.
posted by
anib
on December 3, 2009 at 9:56 PM
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sam
Actually I feel shy presenting my poems before you greats, but one has to make a
breakstart
...~ one day or other, and that's what I am doing, and in the process to be commended by you all, is really fantastic for me. Thank you so very much.
posted by
anib
on December 3, 2009 at 9:54 PM
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magic_moon
The magical that you are, your comment so gladdens me.
posted by
anib
on December 3, 2009 at 9:51 PM
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Shobs
It's great to be appreciated as 'truly fantastic'. Knowing my own poetic credentials, I loved to hear this from you. Thannkksss

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posted by
anib
on December 3, 2009 at 9:49 PM
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This is a truly a fantastic poem abanerjee. A lesson for all in it. Great Job.




posted by
shobana
on December 3, 2009 at 9:45 PM
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...delightful, insightful...contra-spiteful...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 3, 2009 at 5:54 PM
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This is fantastic! I tip my hat and extend my kudos! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 3, 2009 at 5:41 PM
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I Like it a lot. My Dad used to go balistic when a mosquitoe bit him
He was deaf....so couldn't hear the whine just feel the burning/ itching of the bite. This poemreminded me of the darling father I loved so much.
posted by
Kabu
on December 3, 2009 at 9:30 AM
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I don't want to share my space with them. So I fight them off when the need arises. I can't help but think of where they might have last sat before they sat on me.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 3, 2009 at 6:52 AM
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Very well expressed!
posted by
Nita09
on December 3, 2009 at 4:53 AM
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Intersting!
Not your usual fare, but enjoyable none-the-less. Have a very nice day!
posted by
lindo
on December 3, 2009 at 2:04 AM
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