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I am drawn to every poem, every line and every word you write...i can feel the pain in the heart of the poet, and I hurt too..just remembering the moment
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on December 13, 2009 at 12:51 PM
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towards a mauve colored sunset... How stunning! This poem is incredulous, I can't recall the last time a poem slowed me down to savor imagery, I just can't! A most beautiful write, but even more so the outpouring of the poet's soul is so prevalent, not to be identified with the poet per se, but when the soul is move and the imagery is almost thrust-like! So awesome! Love you my dear friend! sammie 
xoxoxoo
posted by
sam444
on December 12, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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I think Anaïs Ségalas would have loved your poem. 
posted by
TAPS.
on December 12, 2009 at 3:02 PM
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Wonderful work as ever, Lady!
do you remember the key
the water dansing
in its unquestioned manner
one does not forget
sunlight
against silent window panes
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 11, 2009 at 9:42 PM
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Such great imagery! It makes me feel empty inside. Very powerful poetry
posted by
muley12
on December 11, 2009 at 9:29 PM
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Sinome, my friend
Poignantly gripping and a very attractively powerful ending xoxoxo -:)
posted by
anib
on December 11, 2009 at 7:38 PM
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Sad and beautiful
posted by
calia14
on December 11, 2009 at 7:09 PM
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Those memories will remain.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 11, 2009 at 6:53 PM
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Simone!
Oh I’m very sorry. Gosh I love my two ha loves. I feel joy about your poem. Excellent! BC-A Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on December 11, 2009 at 6:47 PM
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shobana
That’s natural. BC-A Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on December 11, 2009 at 6:44 PM
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sorry I havent commented for a while, my mind is lost, but sometimes I wish we didint have memories
posted by
Lanetay
on December 11, 2009 at 9:48 AM
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I will remember
Really sweet, thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 10, 2009 at 11:22 PM
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Ah to remember what was - to remember
beautiful and carries the epitome of soul - You touch my heart so, Sinome ~ Elyse xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on December 10, 2009 at 9:21 PM
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Thank you
I needed to read this.
posted by
shadesofblue
on December 10, 2009 at 7:58 PM
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what wonderful words of nostalgic remembrance from an expert talent
xoxoxoxox
posted by
Kabu
on December 10, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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