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Sinome
Gripping! "the words I write are the words I bleed" and despite my not wanting others to know of my needs, I helplessly paint in the colors of my words, just as helpless as I cannot prevent a setting sun not to leave. The melancholy note is so touching, and I must tell you that I am, ... touched. Be well,my friend xoxoxo
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posted by
anib
on December 16, 2009 at 8:11 PM
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your melancholy flavour of beauty is unmistakable
and always enchanting to read. This poem also had me nodding knowingly... I am sure most of us who write feel the same way sometimes. Great poem, sweetie xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on December 16, 2009 at 7:30 AM
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...wow!...poignant is definitely the word...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 16, 2009 at 6:33 AM
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Wow! What a poignant poem, sweetie! I marvel at your imagery! Love you, too! sammie
posted by
sam444
on December 16, 2009 at 4:00 AM
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posted by
RomaKay
on December 15, 2009 at 8:45 PM
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(I agree with 9Star) ~ just totally perfect - so much depth and revelation - inspiration - Sinome ~
posted by
elysianfields
on December 15, 2009 at 8:23 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on December 15, 2009 at 7:23 PM
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I enjoy writing in the dark too. Something causes the words to flow better, I feel.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 15, 2009 at 7:04 PM
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Please don't ever stop your words--not any of them.
The ones you would deign to stop are those most poignant.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 15, 2009 at 6:26 PM
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"........and at times they reveal
things I don't want the world to know I need,
feelings I prefer others not to know I have,...."
Oh how I have felt those feelings I prefer others not to know, your writing wakes a person up to the inside of themselves luv. Marvelous writer you are my friend
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 15, 2009 at 5:54 PM
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iIREALLY FEEL THAT TUG OF THE HEART WHEN I READ YOUR
POEMS....YOU EXPRESS THE PAIN OF LOSS SO WELL. I KNOW OF THOSE QUIET TIMES OF DARK WHEN NO ONE IS AROUND AND THE PAIN CAN BE RELEASED IN PRIVATE.
posted by
Kabu
on December 15, 2009 at 5:06 PM
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The sadness and deep sorrow of hear is really felt in your writing...quite
a talent you possess, Simone.
posted by
Ariala
on December 15, 2009 at 4:58 PM
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