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Your poem here is like a dream world. When you wake you wonder what it's all about.
Fascinating to read, and interesting to take it further and study upon it.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 20, 2009 at 4:48 PM
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Sinome, I am lost for words. To be so in tune with nature to take of the earth and send one heavenly is such magnamities! Such insight! Tremendous!
I am so sorry I frightened you to breaking tile! lol I had to use poetic license for the poem. Normally when the 'y' is added as a suffix, the vowel is dropped. If I did that then I have a whole new word and the frolic is gone. I tried a dash, then ' ' but it didn't exude the chagrin I was wanting to set up!
I hope your have a tree-mendous time with your family during the holidays! I bet the little ones are besides themselves with waiting. You mean a great deal to me and I love you dearly! Merry Christmas! sammie 
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on December 20, 2009 at 10:46 AM
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a snow covered rock would hard to find
posted by
Lanetay
on December 20, 2009 at 9:36 AM
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Marta
What I loved about this poem is, first, it is different, and second, a simple rock with the snow covering, refelecting light, like the moon ...being transmuted in a dream as being a mystical opening to a door to heaven is an exquisite imagery and has a lot of finesse xoxoxo
~ Aba.
posted by
anib
on December 20, 2009 at 7:55 AM
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Heaven's Gate
very mystical and mysterious
posted by
2Philomena
on December 20, 2009 at 5:38 AM
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boootiful as always!
posted by
Star5_
on December 19, 2009 at 9:58 PM
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...that portal and what lies beyond is indeed a great mystery..moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 19, 2009 at 8:36 PM
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Very intreging and captivating
posted by
skye08
on December 19, 2009 at 8:16 PM
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Sinome - such a nice poem
thank you for visiting my blog. The world is so big and can fit all of us. So let's be friends again.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on December 19, 2009 at 6:51 PM
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I find this poem to be incredibly captivating!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 19, 2009 at 5:26 PM
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wellworth stepping through those gates
one day; when one must go. So beautifully put together.
posted by
Kabu
on December 19, 2009 at 5:11 PM
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Love it!! Beautiful passage way to new worlds!
posted by
Ariala
on December 19, 2009 at 3:26 PM
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