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J Your poem shows power, using words. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on December 24, 2009 at 8:55 PM
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You're clearly placed differently. In my case Love has turned me away....
posted by
Straightforward
on December 24, 2009 at 8:31 PM
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O wow! This is incredulous imagery! And s I was reading, I wondered how many would find themselves in this stanza:
I know I make too much of yesterday.
I dream and am as gentle as a lamb
I wonder why I turn all love away.
And sigh, ‘Oh what a fool I am’
How many, indeed! sam 
posted by
sam444
on December 24, 2009 at 11:09 AM
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