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Sinome

I lived that, sat by the ocean in CA and let the ocean lap at my toes, and cried for days and she didn't come back. You express those emotions as though you too know that grief luv

posted by WileyJohn on December 26, 2009 at 2:38 PM | link to this | reply

Your comment made my day Sweetie! I have always thought I needed to suffer so He could keep my attention; but I did look behind my back for it is a more pleasant view than mine! Love you TONS!!! sammie

posted by sam444 on December 26, 2009 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

As Ariala sais... beautiful yet haunting. Another write straight from the soul....

posted by Troosha on December 26, 2009 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

The moon tries to hide, but can't! Astounding imagery for me! I hope your Christmas was pure delight my dearest friend! Mine was quiet for I had a migraine! But still a wonderful day! Love you like the moon trying to hide, it will always be there and bright! sammie

posted by sam444 on December 26, 2009 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

"hoping, aching for a sweet and warm wet kiss, the sand's to come from the sea but hers......hers must come from him", a most beautiful ending, my friend xoxoxo Merry Christmas ..

posted by anib on December 25, 2009 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

J A nice analogy of sea and soul. BC-A, Bill’s Roost

posted by BC-A on December 25, 2009 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

What a beautiful place to be ~ by the shore --- with the ebb and flow - the waves, the ripples, the stream of life - salt of the earth - and My Sinome - your poetry touches my heart in this spray of desire ~ romantique desire. You're so lovely ~ Elyse

xoxox

posted by elysianfields on December 25, 2009 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

The beach is the perfect setting for this.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 25, 2009 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply

...love never fails..moon