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? J Lovely. Aw your poem impresses me with its fullness of love and life love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on December 28, 2009 at 6:08 AM
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...your poetry is very lyrical...as i read...i heard it almost as a song...must be the love that does that, huh?...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on December 27, 2009 at 12:33 PM
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my heart was beating
to the rhythom of this post, well said of love and yearnings.
posted by
Tzippy
on December 27, 2009 at 8:39 AM
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thank you all for the love, I really appreciate it
...Happy Holidays
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on December 27, 2009 at 8:04 AM
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extremely creative and rich - full of emotion and imagery ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 26, 2009 at 9:21 PM
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Embracing love! Great expression & feel!
posted by
shamasehar
on December 26, 2009 at 8:06 PM
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PoetikliNclynd
You're not just inclined to poetry, you are poetry, that was sad but sooooooooo expressive

posted by
WileyJohn
on December 26, 2009 at 6:21 PM
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I feel a mix of happiness and sadness while reading this. A real emotional roller coaster your poems take the reader on.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 26, 2009 at 4:24 PM
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YOU ARE VERY CREATIVE WITH YOUR STYLE AND FOR ME IT WORKS.
This is sad, so full of lovebrings tears to one's eyes that tearing apart of people who love each other.
posted by
Kabu
on December 26, 2009 at 3:23 PM
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So sweet... so sad... like a letter to a love one must leave but don't want to... Excellent! xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on December 26, 2009 at 3:19 PM
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