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An incredibly loyal person the speaker to this poem is.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 27, 2009 at 8:50 PM
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I love this
How many times this was my wish for Richard. You have said it so beautifully.
posted by
skye08
on December 27, 2009 at 5:37 PM
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Sinome
Well if I was the guy you were writing to, I'd crawl over broken glass in the snow of the Rockies to get to ya luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 27, 2009 at 3:24 PM
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How magical if the 'if only' were so magical and make it all come to be! Wow! Loved this poem! You are the romantic and I am delightfully envious for I could never conceive this brilliant imagery! I tip my poetic in awe of thee! Wonderful Sweetie! I hope your holidays are going well. My migraine has now subsided to a mild roar, trust me, that is good! Love you missy!!!! sammie
posted by
sam444
on December 27, 2009 at 10:00 AM
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sooo pretty and thoughtful
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on December 27, 2009 at 8:13 AM
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Sinome
Love. indeed. And maybe you DO erase some of the sadness just by being you.
posted by
Troosha
on December 27, 2009 at 7:57 AM
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...love this...this is hot!...one thing leads to another you know..
moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on December 27, 2009 at 6:18 AM
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The yearning is straight from the heart; very beautiful and powerful, as usual! Thanks very much for your kind comment and wishes; please continue to keep Ashish in your prayers. He's home now for the holidays, and again some of the medical test results are worrying. I hope you're doing well, and have a wonderful new year! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on December 27, 2009 at 2:28 AM
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very sweet outcry
isnt it horrible when you wish to do something for someone and cant find the way. Well put.
posted by
Tzippy
on December 26, 2009 at 10:42 PM
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How endearing and compassionate - yes true love when one would - could - this is simply touching and moving Sinome ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 26, 2009 at 9:40 PM
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You brought tears to my eyes too. such longing to shower love
and heal the hurts of life.Such true love all this is held within your poem.
posted by
Kabu
on December 26, 2009 at 7:37 PM
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it made me cry....
posted by
Star5_
on December 26, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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Powerful and touching...this is real love! Totally gripping, too! Wow~!
posted by
Ariala
on December 26, 2009 at 6:51 PM
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