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sam
I was only wondering and you put the stamp of your authority saying it is a lyric poem, which I have always aspired for, to write. And that it came by, I am really uplifted.You catch the essence "deeper in the questioning sends the reader along to ponder sorrow for who had a more sorrowful end to a celebrated life!". Your loving address "my poetic pal, ... picking up the structure of poetry" is an honor for me. Since I am yet not adept in this art, it was more of an intent, an effort, but then once I started words came on their own, though I had to arrange them for conveyance as a study material, too. Your spiritual poetry, as I was reading in your comment at Elyse's blog, will earn you a Nobel, your daughter telling you that only one lady earned it. Wislawa Zymborska is another lady who did, from Poland I think. Your submission was as per God's Will. I'll stand guarantee, no worries 
. Know that you are a special one for me. Thanx a ton.
posted by
anib
on December 28, 2009 at 8:30 PM
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snowview
I am really glad you liked and many thanks for your visits too.
posted by
anib
on December 28, 2009 at 7:40 PM
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Rain
Yes, thank you and I will please more "
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anib
on December 28, 2009 at 7:38 PM
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Ah, sweet essence of a time gone by when the poet orate to the subject of the poem itself! And it is a lyric poem in its own right for it is oratory and teaches a moral lesson! To embrace sorrow with fervent joy and understand what it means in the poignant words of a representative of God, who is God, for Christians, but deeper in the questioning sends the reader along to ponder sorrow for who had a more sorrowful end to a celebrated life! Kudos my poetic pal! Feeble attempt at alliteration! But I find great joy in picking up the structure of poetry that I am familiar with, it is just too cool for me! So, did you do all this in intent or did the words come naturally. For study teaches much and it burrow its way into the brain and emerge most magnificently! sam
PS, I sent my spiritual poetry manuscript to a publisher per an invitation, no guarantees, but at least I finally made a submission! I never really thought I would ever do that, either.
posted by
sam444
on December 28, 2009 at 2:50 PM
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Interesting perspective, and an encouraging reminder in the last line. Thanks for your comment on my article. Nita.
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Nita09
on December 28, 2009 at 7:36 AM
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~ more please.. ~
posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 28, 2009 at 6:42 AM
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janey
So true, sorrow is a divinely designed mother from whom true happiness takes its birth. Thank you for 'pausing' to reflect and getting to the heart of the write.
posted by
anib
on December 27, 2009 at 10:14 PM
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Tzippy
Thanks so much, Tzippy. One of my purposes of writing, besides finding my true bearings is to make my readers think, and it gladdens me to have made you do so.
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anib
on December 27, 2009 at 10:11 PM
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This line -"we've been taught from childhood to only recognize happiness in laughter, not in sorrow" caused me to pause and reflect on its truth. What I have found is true happiness can only be valued as one recognizes the sorrow from which it has been birthed.
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janey_
on December 27, 2009 at 10:01 PM
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interesting concept
I have to think about it a bit -->
posted by
Tzippy
on December 27, 2009 at 9:23 PM
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Sinome
Thanks Marta, I am so glad you approve.xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on December 27, 2009 at 9:02 PM
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Kabu
I am so happy to know that you find my writings "very special", so my profuse thanks 2U, ma'am.
posted by
anib
on December 27, 2009 at 9:00 PM
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shamasehar
Deewana banne me vaastav me bahut mazaa hota hai. Do excuse my crude Urdu and thank you so............!
posted by
anib
on December 27, 2009 at 8:59 PM
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magic_moon
I know it so very well, 'coz you're a sage yourself.
posted by
anib
on December 27, 2009 at 8:56 PM
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Ariala
Thank you so much. I feel greatly grateful at your words that the prayer be answered.
posted by
anib
on December 27, 2009 at 8:55 PM
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Beautiful My friend... Excellent! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on December 27, 2009 at 8:53 PM
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my friend your writings are very special and deep at times.
If we could never take our eyes off our God we would live in bliss.feelno vertigo. we are human and even those we call Saints had their doubts their fears, their fights within themselves.
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Kabu
on December 27, 2009 at 10:53 AM
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Like two sides of a coin............well said! Dard sehnee mein bhi kudrat ni mazaa rakha hai,jab se tune mujhe dewaana bana rakha hai...........!
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shamasehar
on December 27, 2009 at 9:22 AM
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...i have cried in bliss and laughed in sorrow...would that it happened more frequently...moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on December 27, 2009 at 6:56 AM
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Great writing! May your prayer be answered!
posted by
Ariala
on December 27, 2009 at 6:11 AM
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