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Touche! I still like powerless gratitude! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 2, 2010 at 10:45 AM
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I like your style ~ like the old beat poets - like 'rap' - yes, this is lyrical and powerful in its imagery and progression and succession...
cool ~ write on! ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 30, 2009 at 9:10 PM
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PoetikliNclynd
I loved the flow of thoughts and tightened, reigned in unity. Very well done.
posted by
anib
on December 29, 2009 at 7:16 PM
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Wonderful
I must admit it took me a minute to get used to the format. However, once I acclimated I found it very refreshing and the content of the poem is near to my heart. Great Job!
posted by
Budguy
on December 29, 2009 at 4:51 PM
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Re:
*thought
posted by
calia14
on December 29, 2009 at 4:36 PM
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What an amazing journey that was! I like the way you blended that poem, so it doesn't have distinct lines of though. Very cool concepts, the power of a kiss, the aptitude for spoken word.
posted by
calia14
on December 29, 2009 at 3:06 PM
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Great poem... musical almost :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on December 28, 2009 at 8:03 PM
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Powerless gratitude is an exciting concept! And wonderful, vivid imagery throughout! Gripping at times, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 28, 2009 at 6:36 PM
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yes real love will find the way through whatever obstacles it has to.
posted by
Kabu
on December 28, 2009 at 6:24 PM
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Loving the allusion to Robert Frost and that road.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 28, 2009 at 4:04 PM
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you do a wonderful job
of expressing yourself.
posted by
Tzippy
on December 28, 2009 at 4:01 PM
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